Could someone check my grammar please? - bloody stool in elderly people
1. The patient is well nourished, well developed, older women are not acutely ill.
2. He had lately traveling abroad, but was extended to stay in the past year.
3. The old woman complained of pain in the lower right abdomen, fever and nausea.
4. Jane Doe, the patient was in the office today.
5. The patient complained of pain in the stomach area, dark urine and clay-colored stools without jaundice.
6. This patient was seen by intermittent episodes of bloody diarrhea, however, was all the cliches of the colon, and normal, including an X-ray examination.
7. The doctor diagnosed a 35-year-old Iranians living in New Jersey with the aftermath of the TESGastro-intestinal bleeding before.
8. The patient said, referring to accuracy, "I had a sore left hip for over twenty years."
9. Did not exactly a type of fracture in the distal third of the tibia?
10. She has not run the diet of 1200 calories for diabetics, and thus their blood sugar is around 300th
Friday, February 19, 2010
Bloody Stool In Elderly People Could Someone Check My Grammar Please?
3 comments:
1.The report is well fed (with hyphen)
is well developed a bit questionable, me .. is generally not used to develop "people ... What that really means, well developed? I think you're wrong word choice here.
>> "Not in acute distress" - well, philosophically, not in extreme situations, not necessarily that it is not in danger, it is not itself suffer ..
>> You should clarify their statements. Simplicity is the point of the final design, if you think it can be easy and short, but concise, please do so.
2.I will not travel abroad recently, however, he traveled last year.
3. "Complains of abdominal pain right ..."
4 Grammar is very good.
5. clay-colored stools ... (I say "without jaundice because the patient does not really have any symptoms complainint right? Without jaundice is something that should not complain)
6. All radiographs (comma), including the X-ray of the large intestine (colon) and the examination was normal.
7. lives in New Jersey and a facility must be a comma before and after have.
8. The patient said: "blah ..." Relying on its accuracy.
9. Type of fracture HEAD ... (the third of the tibia, is?)
10. 1200-calories. (Period), therefore, the amount of sugar in the blood ....
Nursing student? Check # 9 will be an issue?
Oh yes, # 8, it should be a comma after "said" the patient,
looks good
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